#66 Planning: The Last Rewrite

    Hey everyone, today I will be talking about how we finally finished our script, and it kicks off with a flashlight revealing a creepy mask in the dark.

Trailer 1:

An outside voice says:

 "Detective I think you've missed something..." (automatically creepy in my opinion)

Next, it cuts to fast-paced scenes that create suspense such as, a door slamming shut and the masked villain standing at the end of the hallway. Then footsteps are heard in a cold and empty hallway while someone runs past me suddenly however, I was unable to tell who it was.  Then a masked appears over her shoulder quickly to jump scare the audience. 

Madison: "We closed this case. We were wrong."

Then my character is looking at the cases until suddenly a wooden mask slip under her door. 

Then a whisper for the masked man;

Ethan: "You should've saved us..." in a whisper

Trailer 2: 

Starts off with a street of a neighborhood. 

Voice over: "There is an investigation for the 5th murder to find the masked man called The Hallow Man."

Next, cuts to a scene where Madison is at her desk and I walk in

Me: "Your fingerprints are on the evidence"

Madison: "What! Well, someone must have put them there."

Next Investigation with the witness:

Witness: "He used to watch us from the windows."

Madison finds a clue on the floor. The lights begin to flicker. The masked man is watching from outside. Lights begin to flicker. 

Madison: "These clues aren't random. They are targeted at me!"

To continue, Madison is on her computer when she finds security footage of the masked villain from 10 years ago, complete with a time stamp. The footage keeps glitching, adding to the suspense.

In the next scene, Madison is shoved against a wall by the killer. Her partner, Gaby (me), is with her, but then Gaby’s (me) flashlight suddenly goes out. The room goes completely dark, and when the light flickers back on, Gaby (me) has disappeared. Madison fights back, pushing the killer to the floor and ripping off his mask only to realize it’s actually one of his hostages.

Madison: “Who is making you do this?” 

Hostage: “He never left the fire.”